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today. by ~childoftheuniverse:iconchildoftheuniverse:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Satire > Open


today.  I sat next to someone with the
same jacket as me.  I'm sure she didn't
notice.  So I thought of tapping her so
we could laugh over our faux-fur cuffs.
But she got off the bus while I was
writing this all down.
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the sun rose.
and i woke up

Daily Deviation

Given 2006-11-09

today. by ~childoftheuniverse is a satirical account of an everyday occurrence. (Suggested by ~Amalgamadora and Featured by `PoeticWar)

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=Nimbus9 Apr 13, 2006, 4:55:05 AM
very existential

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Long days and pleasant nights

~jef

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~Segomo Apr 13, 2006, 6:34:29 PM
I've had that... Admittedly it wasn't jacket, nor was it trousers, nor was it hats , but it was the same make of shoes.

It was most odd.

I was torn between running up to them, and happily declaring that we were wearing the very same manufacturer of shoes, and just staring at their feet; they looked grumpy.

Main point, oh how this has been delayed: This thing wins, it's got that nice little coincidence feeling, that I do so enjoy!

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You're full of mashed potatoes, my slinky harbor sloth.
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~neverryou Apr 13, 2006, 10:29:18 PM
so original

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without you i am nothing
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~childoftheuniverse Apr 14, 2006, 12:04:58 AM
i'm glad that you got that.
i was afraid it would come off very concrete

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There are three mirrors in my apartment. If I broke them all, would I still be here? -- Elizabeth Brewster
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~childoftheuniverse Apr 14, 2006, 12:06:49 AM
it's weird that we have such an urge to communicate with eachother. yet we just can't in most cases

and it seems awkward when we try, most times.

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There are three mirrors in my apartment. If I broke them all, would I still be here? -- Elizabeth Brewster
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~zebrazebrazebra Apr 25, 2006, 3:39:16 AM
Did this really happen? It feels like I did. And that feels incredible.
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~childoftheuniverse Apr 25, 2006, 12:44:44 PM
it was on the train. not the bus
but yup.
two black. fake suede and cheap fur coats.
she's a poem.
and i'm sure she has no idea it even happened

i like that

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There are three mirrors in my apartment. If I broke them all, would I still be here? -- Elizabeth Brewster
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~boundlessgravity Apr 28, 2006, 1:09:10 PM
Reminds me of Brautigan's found poem about putting money in the wrong washing machine.

:boogie:

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Your humbleness is showing:
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~childoftheuniverse Apr 28, 2006, 3:47:11 PM
i think i need to buy some brautigan

lucky for me i was going to head to the bookstore in a bit... and there's a 4 for the price of 3 deal!
now i just have to hope there'll be some poetry

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There are three mirrors in my apartment. If I broke them all, would I still be here? -- Elizabeth Brewster
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